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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Today I would like share to you about my house dream in the future. I wish I have a house in the Ho Chi Minh City center to live with my parents, husband and my children. It's large about 100 square meter There are 10 rooms in my house: six bed rooms (there is a bathroom and a sofa in there), one dining room, one living room, one kitchen and one relax room on weekend. Besides there is a garage, swimming pool and grass garden for my sons. My parents can do exercise daily in the grass garden. However, I'm renting the house in HCM now. I will try to change my dream into truth in near future.
  

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Hi, Just a few things. I don't get if it is a dream house which you would love to have, or is it something that you have planned on building? Anonymous Today I would like share to you about my house dream in the future.

— LouiST

  • Hi, Just a few things.
  • I don't get if it is a dream house which you would love to have, or is it something that you have planned on building?
  • Anonymous Today I would like share to you about my house dream in the future.
  • 'would like share' doesn't work.
  • It would be: would like to share.
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Hi,
Just a few things.

I don't get if it is a dream house which you would love to have, or is it something that you have planned on building?
AnonymousToday I would like share to you about my house dream in the future.
'would like share' doesn't work. It would be: would like to share. But share sounds rather odd to me.
Today I would like to tell
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