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Ankz Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Help me correct a sentence.

It was during my undergraduate years while taking a communications course that it struck me how widespread the technology has developed; and how far-reaching its impact has been on humanity.



Is it grammatically okay!! plz Help me make more interesting sentence which could easily grab attention of admission comittee.
  

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When I was taking an undergraduate communications course, it struck me how much the technology has developed and how far-reaching its impact has been.

  • When I was taking an undergraduate communications course, it struck me how much the technology has developed and how far-reaching its impact has been.
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When I was taking an undergraduate communications course, it struck me how much the technology has developed and how far-reaching its impact has been.
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Actually its starting sentence of my statement so i want to make it interesting enough ..

Is it possible using It was .. starting with when is somewhat dull I suppose..

Thank you.

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