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Thanhnam46 Posted 11 years ago
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The graph illustrates the percentage of electricity used for four different purposes in an average English household.
  

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Try this: The graph illustrates in percentage the average English household's use of electricity for four different purposes.

  • Try this: The graph illustrates in percentage the average English household's use of electricity for four different purposes.
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Try this:
The graph illustrates in percentage the average English household's use of electricity for four different purposes.
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I prefer the original sentence.
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I would use 'the' average household instead of 'an'

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