Help me check the ielts Task 1

The pie charts compare the chosen to study at Parker University of the student which before and after graduating.

Overall, selecting to study at Parker university because the personal recommodation and cost are the largest proportion of decisions in both undergraduates and postgraduates.

In addition, students in both (sides/generations/levels) (I don't know what word should write?) choose a similar percentage of their reasons to go to Parker university in the remaining four categories.

42% of postgraduates' decisions to learn in Parker university is for the reputation of the university while the proportion of the undergraduates, at 35%. In term of cost, the figure for the
postgraduates is slightly higher than that for the undergraduates, at 32% and 24% respectively. However, are proportion of personal recommodation of undergraduates (18%) is 12% more than that in the reasons to apply to Parker University of postgraduates.

The percentage of the location and other are exactly the same in both (sides/levels), at 8% of undergraduates and then decreasing to 6% with postgraduates. Likewise, the figure for students who decided to apply to Parker university because the availability of accommodation is very low, about 7% of undergraduates and 8% of postgraduates.