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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Help me check out two sentences? Thank you!

1. When the iphone 4s launched, iphone 4 price was much lower, about 1000RMB.
2. When you were calling someone, maybe your phone would be hung up.
  

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1. When the iPhone 4 was launched, its price was much lower, about RMB1000. 2.

  • 1.
  • When the iPhone 4 was launched, its price was much lower, about RMB1000.
  • 2.
  • -- I don't understand what you want to say.
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1. When the iPhone 4 was launched, its price was much lower, about RMB1000.
2. When you were calling someone, maybe your phone would be hung up.-- I don't understand what you want to say.
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Sorry, maybe I don't make myself clear. Iphone 4 and iphone 4s are different. I don't think I should use "its" in the first sentence.
In the second sentence, what I want to say is that there is some signal problem of the iphone 4s, so it may be hang up or cut off? Sorry, I don't know how to express it. Can you help me with this sentence?
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Ah, sorry— I don't have a cellphone, so I didn't recognize the names; but it should be a capital 'S'. Let me rephrase #1:

1. When the iPhone 4S was launched, the price of the iPhone 4 dropped to about RMB1000.
2. When you were calling someone, sometimes your call would be cut off.

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