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Fashan Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Help me check my grammar please?

Hi Friends,

Below is paragraph I create in my CV. Could someone please help me to make a correction if there any mistake.

Thanks in advance.
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Have 6+ Years of major experience in Civil & Structural Engineering within Onshore Oil and Gas, LNG, Refining, Chemical, Metals & Mining, Power and Petrochemical Industry. Also have a minor experience in Subsea. Has been involve in several major project.

Experienced in using CAD software for 2D Drafting and 3D Modelling purpose, such as PDS Framework plus, PDMS Design, PDMS Draft, Microstation v7/v8/v8i/, AutoCAD and Smartplant Review. Familiar with PDS and PDMS Section Library/Section Code: BCSA, China, Euro, Japan, AISC and Australia. As a PDS, PDMS, and SmartPlant core operator I also have a basic knowledge about administration implementation of CAD software.

Have a basic knowledge of programming understanding such as PML + MACRO (for PDMS), Visual basic (for general programming software)
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Hello, Fashan—and welcome to English Forums. If you are going to format it as paragraphs, you must write complete sentences: I have 6+ years of solid experience in civil and structural engineering in the onshore oil and gas, LNG, refining , chemical, metals and mining, power and petrochemical industries. I also have some experience in subsea engineering.

— Mister Micawber

  • Hello, Fashan—and welcome to English Forums.
  • If you are going to format it as paragraphs, you must write complete sentences: I have 6+ years of solid experience in civil and structural engineering in the onshore oil and gas, LNG, refining , chemical, metals and mining, power and petrochemical industries.
  • I also have some experience in subsea engineering.
  • I have been involved in several major projects.
  • I am experienced in CAD software for 2D drafting and 3D modelling purposes , such as PDS Framework Plus , PDMS Design, PDMS Draft, Microstation v7/v8/v8i/, AutoCAD and Smartplant Review.
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Hello, Fashan—and welcome to English Forums. If you are going to format it as paragraphs, you must write complete sentences:

I have 6+ years of solid experience in civil and structural engineering in the onshore oil and gas, LNG, refining, chemical, metals and mining, power and petrochemical industries. I also have some expe
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Hi Mister Micawber,

Very very much appreciated for the rapid feedback.

Thanks so much.
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Hi Mister Micawber,

Could you please check this paragraph too.Emotion: smile

Thanks in advance

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I am looking for a challenging job that offers hands-on experience in civil and structural work within the oil and gas engineering field in order to augment my skills and project management abilities.

You should not comment on personal financial needs in your CV or cover letter. Save that for salary negotiations.
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Thanks for feedback and advise
now I learn something.

Thanks again
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Hi please check this for me.

Thanks in advance.

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  1. Generally Prepare 2D drawing and 3D modelling compliant to project standard and company requirement.
  2. Prepare the details drawings of miscellaneous support.
  3. Prepare a Concrete Reinforcement detail drawings (e.g. Ring Beam, Cable pit, Foundation, Retaining Wall, RC Staircase,
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I don't think you're learning everything, though! First, go through your text and eliminate all the capital letters except the acronyms and re-post.
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Hi,

I will try do it my self.
Anyway Thanks so much for your good deeds.
Again thanks for rapid feedback.
Nice to know you in here.

bye for now
Have a nice day my great teacher.
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I would like to submit my resume for future opportunity for Civil/ Structural engineer- position.

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