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SHOULD YOUNG PEOPLE INCLUDE ME HAVE SLOW LIVING IN THE MODERN ERA

Today, most youngsters are always under pressure which originates from their parents’ expectations and social orientation. These things are likely to promote them to be industrious in every aspect of life such as studies, work, developing themselves, … But another thing they have influenced in young people is urging them in time or quality, this makes them depress and have no ability to control the situation. As a student who has also need to face this problem, the good advice for them is to slow down the speed of living despite the social harsh request of evolution.

Firstly, the benefits of slowing down the speed of life can be indicated in letting youngsters have more time to build taking over skills. Indeed, most of the youngsters have rushed headlong into studies, work or what they want to achieve then they can get easily frustrated with any hurdle or slight delay while frustration is unlikely to get us to our goal more quickly. In contrast, if people have their life on the slow lane, they will be allowed to have a chance to build up their resilience by learning from mistakes without worries or shame. Another point to notice that young people today have enough facilities to live and enjoy life than senior generations. That’s why youngsters will get things done better if they have more time to correct the mistake, learn from experience than just diving into work to earn money or studies to get high scores.

Secondly, young generations are unnecessary to speed up their life for being authenticated by their success, contribution. To be more specific, slow living doesn’t mean to be sedentary, to postpone the work, do nothing, to live meaninglessly but in this life people will enjoy doing what they have a heart for slowly such as backpacking tourism around the world, spending more time in a day for reading, cooking, chatting with family or friends than working… Although activities in slow life don’t have the notorious contribution in society, economics or country, science has found that when people have the ability to do what they like, their productivity and the quality of outcome reach its highest level. Thus, the more easily they figure out they are doing well, the more they want to have positive influences on communities and lend a hand for others.

In brief, slow living can be considered as a therapy for youngsters to overcome the pressure from work, family, and society. By enjoying life fully, they can develop themselves interpersonally from mistakes, determine their own path to what the happiness they want and achieve success in life.