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The given map depict the present and the future appearance of Hund town . The town witnessed dramatic changes with the development of transport infrastructure , the appearance of industrial estate

As can be seen in the fist map, the town being divided into two main are by the railway which runs from the north to the south and passes though the gas station . To the left, there is the airfield which connect to the main road(A2) . in the middle of this road is the roundabout connect the a1 to the east of the town in particular, to the ring rod in font of the town center

In the future , the air field will be converted in to industrial estate which connect to the railway by a new road , while the old roundabout have been left un develop.The most significant change is the introduction of the big roundabout intersection of the ring road railway and the road which connect to the old roundabout

A new road which connect the town center and A2 will also be constructed to provide further access

Over roll , the town will change a lot ,be more accsicable due to the development of the infrastructure

  

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