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Mano_ Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
help me by reviewing my experience letter
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00 Can any one please help me by reviewing experience letter given below? 02 br
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00 Thanks in advances. 02 br
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00 mano_ 02 br
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01 b 01 u 00 TO WHOMSOEVER IT MAY CONCERN 02 u 02 b 02 br
00 This is to certify that Mr. xxxx has been associated with our organization from January dd, 2003 to January dd, 2006. His designation at the time of relieving him of duties was Embedded Software Engineer and was reporting under embedded & system software 01 b 00 02 b 00 Division 01 font 00 [is this statement fine] 02 font 00 . 02 br
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00 His duties during his tenure included simulating and developing system software for DSP based engineering systems. 01 font 00 [should I add more specific duties or this broader statement is more then needed ] 02 font 00 He exhibited a high degree of professionalism and performance in his work 01 font 00 [/duties] 02 font 00 . 02 br
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00 We appreciate the services rendered by him and we sincerely wish him all the success in his future endeavors. 02 br
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00 Yours Truly 02 br
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00 For XYZZZ 01 i 00 _______ 02 i 00 -Ltd 02 br
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00 _____name 02 br
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00 _____________Sr. Manager - Human Resources 0-
00 Can any one please help me by reviewing experience letter given below? 02 br
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00 Thanks in advances. 02 br
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00 mano_ 02 br
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00 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 02 br
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01 b 01 u 00 TO WHOMSOEVER IT MAY CONCERN 02 u 02 b 02 br
00 This is to certify that Mr. xxxx has been associated with our organization from January dd, 2003 to January dd, 2006. His designation at the time of relieving him of duties was Embedded Software Engineer and was reporting under embedded & system software 01 b 00 02 b 00 Division 01 font 00 [is this statement fine] 02 font 00 . 02 br
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00 His duties during his tenure included simulating and developing system software for DSP based engineering systems. 01 font 00 [should I add more specific duties or this broader statement is more then needed ] 02 font 00 He exhibited a high degree of professionalism and performance in his work 01 font 00 [/duties] 02 font 00 . 02 br
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00 We appreciate the services rendered by him and we sincerely wish him all the success in his future endeavors. 02 br
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00 Yours Truly 02 br
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00 For XYZZZ 01 i 00 _______ 02 i 00 -Ltd 02 br
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00 _____name 02 br
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00 _____________Sr. Manager - Human Resources 0-
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0 01 b 01 u 00 TO WHOMSOEVER IT MAY CONCERN 02 u 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 This is to certify that Mr. *** has been associated with our organization from January dd, 2003 to January dd, 2006. 02 br 02 br 00 We appreciate the services rendered by him and we sincerely wish him all the success in his future endeavors.
- 0 01 b 01 u 00 TO WHOMSOEVER IT MAY CONCERN 02 u 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 This is to certify that Mr.
- *** has been associated with our organization from January dd, 2003 to January dd, 2006.
- 02 br 02 br 00 We appreciate the services rendered by him and we sincerely wish him all the success in his future endeavors.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Yours Truly 02 br 02 br 00 For XYZZZ 01 i 00 _______ 02 i 00 -Ltd 02 br 02 br 00 _____name 02 br 02 br 00 _____________Sr.
- Manager - Human Resources 0-
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0 01 b 01 u 00 TO WHOMSOEVER IT MAY CONCERN 02 u 02 b 02 br
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00 This is to certify that Mr. *** has been associated with our organization from January dd, 2003 to January dd, 2006. His designation at the time of relieving him of duties was 01 b 00 Embedded Software Engineer. 02 b 00 00 and was reporting under Embedded & System So
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00 This is to certify that Mr. *** has been associated with our organization from January dd, 2003 to January dd, 2006. His designation at the time of relieving him of duties was 01 b 00 Embedded Software Engineer. 02 b 00 00 and was reporting under Embedded & System So
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0 There are a couple of weird phrases in your first paragraph. Why 'associated with' instead of 'worked for'? 02 br
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00 at the time of relieving him of duties - this makes him sound as though he was forced out, dismissed, etc and creates a very poor impression of him. People are 'relieved of their duties' by force. Just say 'when he left'. 0-
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00 at the time of relieving him of duties - this makes him sound as though he was forced out, dismissed, etc and creates a very poor impression of him. People are 'relieved of their duties' by force. Just say 'when he left'. 0-
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0 u should not write abt ur roles & responsibilities in ur service letter 02 br
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00 TO WHOMSOEVER IT MAY CONCERN 02 br
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00 This is to certify that Mr. *** was an employee in our organization from Monday, August 26, 1111to Thursday, December 8, 5555 with the designation Software Engineer - xyz. 02 br
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00 TO WHOMSOEVER IT MAY CONCERN 02 br
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00 This is to certify that Mr. *** was an employee in our organization from Monday, August 26, 1111to Thursday, December 8, 5555 with the designation Software Engineer - xyz. 02 br
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1 b 01 u 00 TO WHOMSOEVER IT MAY CONCERN 02 u 02 b 02 br
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00 This is to certify that Mr. *** 01 b 01 font 00 was an employee of **** 02 font 02 b 00 from January dd, 2003 to January dd, 2006 01 b 01 font 00 and was designated as Senior Software Engineer. 02 font 0
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00 This is to certify that Mr. *** 01 b 01 font 00 was an employee of **** 02 font 02 b 00 from January dd, 2003 to January dd, 2006 01 b 01 font 00 and was designated as Senior Software Engineer. 02 font 0
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