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Kolndom Posted 21 years ago
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help me _ an important explanation

I am to send CD containing the DV record of one concert I participated, to the school I applied.
The following serves as the explanation of the CD.
Would u please have a look at it, and improve it if possible?
Thank u in ad Emotion: smile

This is a DV record of one of the public piano concerts I participated.
U can open the file by either windows media player or real player.
The piece I performed-Saint Saens' Piano Concerto No2 g op22, is the last piece of the concert, which begins at 42m21s.
Thank u in advance for your kind attention.
  

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Hi, This is a DV recording of one of the public piano concerts in which I participated. You can open the file using either Windows Media Player or Real Player. The piece I performed is Saint Saens' Piano Concerto No2 g op22.

— Clive

  • Hi, This is a DV recording of one of the public piano concerts in which I participated.
  • You can open the file using either Windows Media Player or Real Player.
  • The piece I performed is Saint Saens' Piano Concerto No2 g op22.
  • It is the last piece in the concert, and begins after 42m.
  • 21s.
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Hi,

This is a DV recording of one of the public piano concerts in which I participated. You can open the file using either Windows Media Player or Real Player.
The piece I performed is Saint Saens' Piano Concerto No2 g op22. It is the last piece in the concert, and begins after 42m. 21s.
Thank you in advance for your kind attention.

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