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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Help me about introductory & motivation letter for work&travel program
Is it OK?
Introductory letter
Dear: Sir/Madam
My name is ............. You can call me .......... This is my introductory letter to let you know better about my skill & experience.
Firstly, about my personality, I am easy going, friendly, patience and hard working. In addition, I have positive thinking and ability to work with a team.
Secondly, I have some computer skills such as using Microsoft Word and surfing the internet. Furthermore, I have a mathematical skill.
Thirdly, for my work experiences, two years ago, I have worked as a server in my aunt’s food shop for 5 months. Not only that, I was sometimes a cleaner and dishwasher when some of my aunt’s employees absented. Although it was a short time, I had a good time in my aunt’s food shop. In this year, I have helped my mom for selling salad at a park in the morning weekend. This can increase my family’s income.
Lastly, I think all of my skills & experiences could be an advantage for working at your worksite.
Introductory letter
Dear: Sir/Madam
My name is ............. You can call me .......... This is my introductory letter to let you know better about my skill & experience.
Firstly, about my personality, I am easy going, friendly, patience and hard working. In addition, I have positive thinking and ability to work with a team.
Secondly, I have some computer skills such as using Microsoft Word and surfing the internet. Furthermore, I have a mathematical skill.
Thirdly, for my work experiences, two years ago, I have worked as a server in my aunt’s food shop for 5 months. Not only that, I was sometimes a cleaner and dishwasher when some of my aunt’s employees absented. Although it was a short time, I had a good time in my aunt’s food shop. In this year, I have helped my mom for selling salad at a park in the morning weekend. This can increase my family’s income.
Lastly, I think all of my skills & experiences could be an advantage for working at your worksite.
Top answer
Hello, I would drop the Firstly, secondly, thirdly style and just try to write nicely flowing pieces. Letter My name is ............. I am applying for ..................................
- Hello, I would drop the Firstly, secondly, thirdly style and just try to write nicely flowing pieces.
- Letter My name is .............
- I am applying for ..................................
- I believe I am a good candidate for this programme and I have enclosed a motivation letter with further information about my work experience, qualifications, and reason for applying.
- I am an efficient and well-organised (or whatever you want to emphasise) worker and I'm sure I would bring a lot to your company.
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Hello,
I would drop the Firstly, secondly, thirdly style and just try to write nicely flowing pieces.
Letter
My name is .............
I am applying for ..................................
I believe I am a good candidate for this programme and I have enclosed a motivation letter with further information about my work experience, qualifications, and reas
I would drop the Firstly, secondly, thirdly style and just try to write nicely flowing pieces.
Letter
My name is .............
I am applying for ..................................
I believe I am a good candidate for this programme and I have enclosed a motivation letter with further information about my work experience, qualifications, and reas
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