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Sharadjee Posted 14 years ago
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Is this email correctly written? please edit.

Dear Sir.
Thank you for good your response. As we talked on phone this afternoon, for your information I am sending two related pieces of the news. And my questions, related to the news have been posted at the bottom of this email. It would be great if you let me know about tentative time to talk on that matter on Friday afternoon. Around 2 pm will be appropriate for me.
Thanks a lot for your valuable cooperation.

Yours faithfully
  

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Dea r Mr [ surname ], Thank you for your positive response. As I mentioned on the phone this afternoon, for your information I am sending two related pieces of news, and my questions have been posted at the bottom of this email. It would be great if we could talk about this matter on Friday afternoon.

— Mister Micawber

  • Dea r Mr [ surname ], Thank you for your positive response.
  • As I mentioned on the phone this afternoon, for your information I am sending two related pieces of news, and my questions have been posted at the bottom of this email.
  • It would be great if we could talk about this matter on Friday afternoon.
  • Ar ound 2 pm would be better for me, but please suggest a convenient time for you.
  • Thanks a lot for your valuable advice.
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Dear Mr [surname],

Thank you for your positive response. As I mentioned on the phone this afternoon, for your information I am sending two related pieces of news, and my questions have been posted at the bottom of this email.

It would be great if we could talk about this matter on Friday afternoon. Around 2 pm would be be
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Many thanks MIcawber
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