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My future plan is to get professionally involved in a socio-pragmatic analysis related to the language of terrorism. Therefore I would like to gain a deeper practical knowledge, hands-on experience in linguistics. I see this international scholarship as the best place to achieve my career objectives. In dealing with the language of terrorism there is an endless guiding process in our life. I am highly interested in studying terrorism from different areas and willing to give my very best on a daily basis with a friendly attitude. (---- )is one of the most severely attacked countries in the world and it is also the place where I lived my --- years. As a natural consequence, I want to study the socio- pragmatics of the language terrorism so that I can get back to my country completing my studies and apply my knowledge and skills to alter the concurrent situation. Deeply embedded in(----)life and traditions will enhance me to deal with this language because of the severe attack of the terrorists (--------). With courses set under the Department of English Language, I will have access to a wide array of studies both within and beyond my chosen major. I will design a course prospecting, guiding students about the danger of terrorism which is used the religious texts to justify their violence against humanity. In addition, I will thrill the importance of the relation between language and politics to construct our life.

I am interested in studying socio-pragmatics because that field of study fits with my aptitudes, and, most importantly, desire. Socio-pragmatics is the study of language from the point of view of users and of the choices they make. Taking into account the problems they encounter in using language in social interaction and the effects their use of language has on other participants in the act of communication. Related to this area of studying, I will be able to formulate the motivation for which I candidate to this Field of linguistics. Due to the (------), I believe that I will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I plan to weld relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural communication takes place effectively. .
The language of 'terrorism’ comprises a vast corpus of texts (speeches, laws, reports, policy documents, letters, emails, and websites), and draws on a great many assumptions, beliefs, myths, tropes and narratives. It also employs a variety of rhetorical and discursive strategies. Language plays an active role in creating and changing perceptions, cognition and emotions. As something particularly human, language moulds how we see the world; it is the main determinant of our perceptions and our access to concrete reality.
Many of us complain that we live in an imperfect system of life which is full of terrorism, violence which favors the strong ones against the weak ones. What’s more grave is the fact that many limit themselves to only expressing these opinions, without trying to change anything. I certainly believe that confining ourselves with the life we are living, even if it’s full of difficulties, we are actually denying our desire of improving. The evolution is being realized by the discontented, and I am deeply discontented not only by the way things are working in the national plan, but also international. Deep inside me there is a burning desire of change! I want as much possible as I can to bring my contribution to our common sake. But it is impossible for me to realize this ideal without having a strong knowledge about this domain that I want to improve. I indeed enjoy the great intellectual challenge in the comparative study of the east and west, and I have even decided to make it an object of my lifelong exploration.

Yours sincerely,