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Happiness is considered very important in life, why is it difficult to define, what factors are important in achieving happiness?

Happiness is a feeling, therefore it is hard to define, each people have their own opinion about this. Everyone wants to get more felicity, consequently there are some factors to evaluate a person who have much happiness or not. In my opinion, these are smile and family.

As I mentioned, we cannot define exactly happiness although we may read about it from a dictionary. Everybody has different view and opinion of happiness as other feelings. In general, love, is not only between a man and a woman, is always effective to people, bring them to the peak of happiness. However, some simple things can make people happy too, like listening a song, playing football or even sleeping. Thus, we can find a thousand of definitions in the internet.

Firstly to talk about factors of happiness, smile is an important symbol.For an example, in every cards of congratulation, you will see smile just like a nature thing. In Vietnam having a conception that a smile equals ten medical prescriptions. Somebody may say that smile can be used for hiding real thing or emotion but these smiles are stained. True smiling always appears naturally when happy feelings come.

Secondly, family is an integral part of happiness. Family is already a happy thing. This can be called the base of happiness. A child will be protected and grown completely under his parent's education. Children need both mother and father, if missing each of them or both, children may grow up without feeling real happiness. When a family is in trouble, each person in it might not be in good mood.

To sum up briefly, although cannot define happiness, people always realizes that it is a part of wonderful life what everyone wants to have it. Smile and family is not prerequisite factors but these are always components to evaluate the happiness.

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