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Cherrypie10 Posted 19 years ago
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I can’t think of a better site name before so I’ve decided to name it after the two of my favorite dogs. Cherry and Pie are two of our family dogs, they're the oldest so they're the one whom I love the most.

Is that correct?
  

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Cherrypie10 I can’t think of a better site name before so I’ve decided to name it after the two of my favorite dogs. Cherry and Pie are two of our family dogs, [;] they're the oldest so they're the one whom I love the most. Is that correct?

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  • Cherrypie10 I can’t think of a better site name before so I’ve decided to name it after the two of my favorite dogs.
  • Cherry and Pie are two of our family dogs, [;] they're the oldest so they're the one whom I love the most.
  • Is that correct?
  • A semicolon keeps it from being a "run-on" sentence.
  • I would use 'two' rather than 'ones', but many people use the plural form of 'one'.
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Cherrypie10I can’t think of a better site name before so I’ve decided to name it after the two of my favorite dogs. Cherry and Pie are two of our family dogs, [;] they're the oldest so they're the one whom I love the most.

Is that correct?
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Thank you very much Emotion: smile

I have modified it a bit; so, what do you think? Does it sound better than the other one?

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Thank you very much Emotion: smile

I have modified it a bit; so, what do you think? Does it sound better than the other one?

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