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Joy Lee Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

help me!

0Hello, I am Joy.02br
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00I am a learning English beginner . 02br
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00My English writing is very poor.02br
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00I need your help to me learn English.02br
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00Your teaching is important for me.02br
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00my writing :02br
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00I went to the library on the street when I after school yesterday.02br
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00I saw a old man that have a traffic accident that a car hit the old man, and the old man hurt.02br
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00A few minutes latter ,the ambulance came and take the old man to hospital.02br
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00This is my unforgettable experience.0-
  

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1i01font00Hello Joy - welcome to the forums.02font02i02br
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01i01font00Is this a homework exercise? Shall I highlight the areas that you need to look at again?02font02i02br
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0 01font00My version:02br
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00Hello, I am Joy.02br
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00I am an 01font00English learning02font00 beginner . 02br
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00My English writing is very poor.02br
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00I need your help to learn English.02br
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0Thank you very much .02br
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00This is a question on the book.02br
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00I look for some book to practice myself.02br
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00I want my English will be better, so I need your help.02br
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00Thanks.02br
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00It’s anew!02br
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00Yesterday on my way to the library after s
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0 "I am an 01font00English learning02font00 beginner . "02br
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00haha ~~ Thank you for you teach.0-

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