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Ill use this account for online shopping. Ill open another bank account for you to send money to me.
Actually, I want to get a month free trial from that site and when they trying to charge. They cant because my bank account is empty.
Thank you,
Mosja
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I'll use this account for online shopping and I'll open another bank account for you to send money to me. Actually, I want to get a month's free trial from that site and when they trying to charge. They can't because my bank account is empty.
- I'll use this account for online shopping and I'll open another bank account for you to send money to me.
- Actually, I want to get a month's free trial from that site and when they trying to charge.
- They can't because my bank account is empty.
- You need to rewrite the part at the end that I have marked in italics.
- As written, your meaning is unclear.
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I'll use this account for online shopping and I'll open another bank account for you to send money to me.
Actually, I want to get a month's free trial from that site and when they trying to charge. They can't because my bank account is empty.
You need to rewrite the part at the end that I have marked in italics. As written, your meaning is uncl
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