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sun shone through the stained glass window on which our saviour jesus, lay herotically upon the coloured piece of art. The sun hit my face making it difficlut to see the minister who was talking about god and jeasus to us and how they are special to us.Attending church my whole life was one of my lifes amititions as i am a man of god and as a child had basically been brought up in the church. But recently a group of Theistic Satinisms have been coming outside our church and protesting and rabbling on about how god or christianity should not be worshiped it should be the devl ! god did not make this world therefore shant be a part of it, the rabbled on. Normally they would wait on us coming out then it would start.
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I have underlined problem areas: sun shone through the stained glass window on which our saviour jesus, lay herotically upon the coloured piece of art. Attending church my whole life was one of my lifes amititions as i am a man of *** and as a child had basically been brought up in the church. But recently a group of Theistic Satinisms have been coming outside our church and protesting and rabbling on about how *** or christianity should not be worshiped it should be the devl !
- I have underlined problem areas: sun shone through the stained glass window on which our saviour jesus, lay herotically upon the coloured piece of art.
- Attending church my whole life was one of my lifes amititions as i am a man of *** and as a child had basically been brought up in the church.
- But recently a group of Theistic Satinisms have been coming outside our church and protesting and rabbling on about how *** or christianity should not be worshiped it should be the devl !
- *** did not make this world therefore shant be a part of it, the rabbled on .
- Normally they would wait on us coming out then it would start .
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I have underlined problem areas:
sun shone through the stained glass window on which our saviour jesus, lay herotically upon the coloured piece of art. The sun hit my face making it difficlut to see the minister who was talking about *** and jeasus to us and how they are special to us.Attending church my
sun shone through the stained glass window on which our saviour jesus, lay herotically upon the coloured piece of art. The sun hit my face making it difficlut to see the minister who was talking about *** and jeasus to us and how they are special to us.Attending church my
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