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Samir1 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Help Make A Fluid Sentence?

Hello … I am working on a proposal and am having the hardest time with this sentence:

"I want to identify California Power Energy [name of company] with its namesake's/said state's/the state for which it's named and its/ reputation for environmental awareness."
I also can't abbreviate the company name, hence the problems w/ fluidity.

I (A) am unsure as to whether I am using the phrase "namesake" correctly and (B) can't help but feel there is a more fluid way to say this anyway.

Of the three listed above, which is best? And I am also open to a fourth, if you have one.

Thank you.

  

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I want to link California Power Energy with its reputation for environmental awareness, just as its home state of California. California Power Energy has a reputation for environmental awareness, reflecting that of the state of California.

  • I want to link California Power Energy with its reputation for environmental awareness, just as its home state of California.
  • California Power Energy has a reputation for environmental awareness, reflecting that of the state of California.
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I want to link California Power Energy with its reputation for environmental awareness, just as its home state of California.

California Power Energy has a reputation for environmental awareness, reflecting that of the state of California.

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