[Help] Line graph Writing task 1

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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the number of students who had graduated from their universities for fifteen years from 1992 to 2007.

Overall, there was a settle distance between the number of graduated females and males; females who always hold advantage than males in the period show. On the other side, there was a stable rise in the number of university graduates from 1992 to 2007.

In the first years of the 1990s, the graduated females had approximately 100,000, compared to less than 70,000 of graduated males.

Since 1994, both of sex had been in a mildly fluctuating before a spectacular rise at the end of 2001. At that time, the number of graduated females increased rapidly and reached the highest point at 150,000; whereas the volume of graduated males was just risen slowly from 70,000 to 100,000 since 1992. These figures above showed a growing distance between the number of females and males graduated university over the period years, and this distance is predicted will be larger in the future.