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Lilyris Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

HELP! It's an emergency!

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00Well.. I know that most of the people who writes here asking for help says that it's seuch an emergency... but in my case, I can assure you that I really need your help! I'm applying for a job in USA and I need to send a recommendation letter untill Wednesday (today is monday! I have only 2 days)02br
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00Please, I BEG you guys, If anyone can correct the letter above, I'd be really greatfull!! (I don't know if this is the correct word)02br
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00The student Iris (last name) , came to work with us first time in 2005, at the 6º Brazil Fest in Folk that took place on August, in (name of my city)00.00The festival is an event organized by Abrasoffa, supported by Unesco, where groups of dancing and folk music from many countries participate. The volunteers are housed with the participants in an accommodation during the whole festival, giving all the support, working full time from 6h00 to 24h00.02br
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00She worked as a volunteer during the 2 weeks of event, supporting the organization and the nacional and internacional participants groups. 01b00She demonstrated extremely responsibility with every duty, she’s really hard working and flexible, she had a great relationship with everybody, with respect and profissionalism 02b00and she was always ready to help in whatever and whenever it was needed. (I don't know how to write this in a better way... I think I'm saying too much "she")02br
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00Due to her dedication and for showing good results at her job, we invited her to work again with us at the 7º edition of the Brazil Fest in Folk, and we had the same satisfaction in counting with her.02br
00Doubtless I recommend her to participate at the program Work Experience USA and I can assure you that she is a great candidate, as she showed us that she can deal very well with people from different cultures, speaking a foreign language, she’s flexible because she could 01b00fit (get used?? I don't know ehich word use here)02b00 easiliy to de work time and the accommodation, always respecting every person and dealing everything with much professionalism and dedication.00Sincerely00Terezinha Pasqualini Miquelin00Abrasoffa's President02br
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00Thank you!!0-
  

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02br 01b 00To02b 00 whom 01b 00it02b 00 may concern:02br 02br 01b 00Iris 02b 00(last name01b 00) came02b 00 to work with us 01b 00for the02b 00 first time in 01b 002005 at02b 00 the 01b 006th02b 00 Brazil Fest in Folk01b 00, which02b 00 took place 01b 00in02b 00 01b 00August in 02b 00(name of my city). The festival is an event organized by01b 00 Abrasoffa and02b 00 supported by 01b 00UNESCO02b 00, 01b 00in which02b 00 01b 00dance and folk music groups02b 00 from many countries participate. 02b 00 She demonstrated 01b 00full02b 00 responsibility 01b 00for 02b 00every duty01b 00; she was extremely hard-working02b 00 and flexible, 01b 00and 02b 00she 01b 00developed good relationships02b 00 with 01b 00everyone,02b 00 with respect and professionalism01b 00.

  • 02br 01b 00To02b 00 whom 01b 00it02b 00 may concern:02br 02br 01b 00Iris 02b 00(last name01b 00) came02b 00 to work with us 01b 00for the02b 00 first time in 01b 002005 at02b 00 the 01b 006th02b 00 Brazil Fest in Folk01b 00, which02b 00 took place 01b 00in02b 00 01b 00August in 02b 00(name of my city).
  • The festival is an event organized by01b 00 Abrasoffa and02b 00 supported by 01b 00UNESCO02b 00, 01b 00in which02b 00 01b 00dance and folk music groups02b 00 from many countries participate.
  • 02b 00 She demonstrated 01b 00full02b 00 responsibility 01b 00for 02b 00every duty01b 00; she was extremely hard-working02b 00 and flexible, 01b 00and 02b 00she 01b 00developed good relationships02b 00 with 01b 00everyone,02b 00 with respect and professionalism01b 00.
  • 01b 02br 02br 00I highly 02b 00recommend01b 00 Iris as a participant in02b 00 the Work Experience USA01b 00 program02b 00 and I 01b 00am confident 02b 00that she 01b 00will be02b 00 01b 00an outstanding02b 00 01b 00contributor.
  • She02b 00 showed us that she can deal very well with people 01b 00of 02b 00different cultures01b 00, she can make her way with foreign languages02b 00, 01b 00and02b 00 she01b 00 is extraordinarily flexible regarding 02b 00work 01b 00hours, accommodations,02b 00 01b 00and other inconveniences of such events.
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01b00Iris 02b00(last name01b00) came02b00 to work with us 01b00for the02b00 first time in 01b002005 at02b00 the 01b006th02b00 Brazil Fest in Folk01b

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