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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Help is needed! :) - Thanks!

I have to present a little essay, and I wonder if someone could read it. It takes around 200 words and it is about television. If someone is so kindly as to help me
Thanks in advance! Emotion: wink

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If you post your essay here, other members can look at it and we can all learn.
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Dear Moderator;

Please, excuse me. I apologize: I did not know that private and external help asking was forbidden in your pages.

However, I think that copy my whole essay here would be too annoying for the rest of the readers. Then, I am going to copy only those sentences that make me feel more insecure. If someone find that some of them -or all them!
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Hi,

Welcome to the Forum.

It's great that you are trying to be brief. However, it would be OK if you posted complete sentences rather than fragments, and even a little bit of context. Here are a few comments on what you wrote. But it's hard to comment well on these small pieces.

1) ... the most suitable person to say ... sounds OK

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Yes, post it all if it is in your computer. 200 words is not many.
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