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Newtoenglish Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

help in writing for a financial aid

hey .

they told me in college to write 5-7 lines ''please use the space below for any additional information which you feel will assist the financial aid council in assessing your need:''

i am not very good in english so plz i need ur help because its very important for me to gfet a financial aid.

i want to write '' i need a financial aid because my dad is dead , and my mum work and earn $250 / month only , i like this college and i want to continue........but ...very hard to pay so ..please give me a financial adi ...i am good student..''

please can you write me a good sentences in english ? i need them, to give me the financial aid and i need your help please

thank you and hopefully i'll get the financial aid Emotion: smile
  

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I would write something like the following: I strongly desire to attend your school; however, I simply cannot afford it on my own. My father is deceased, and my mother earns only $250 each month. She simply can't help me achieve my educational goals.

  • I would write something like the following: I strongly desire to attend your school; however, I simply cannot afford it on my own.
  • My father is deceased, and my mother earns only $250 each month.
  • She simply can't help me achieve my educational goals.
  • I am a good student, and I can assure you that your financial aid would not be wasted on me.
  • It is impossible for me to pay the tuition without some form of financial help.
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I would write something like the following:

I strongly desire to attend your school; however, I simply cannot afford it on my own. My father is deceased, and my mother earns only $250 each month. She simply can't help me achieve my educational goals. I am a good student, and I can assure you that your financial aid would not be wasted on me. It is impossible for me to pay the tu

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