0
Mohamed Farouk Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Help in my motivation letter
hi, I am trying to write motivation letter for scholarship for postgraduate studies. . I am still not sure how my letter sounds. Could you please go thru it and tell me your opinion?
Dear Sir,
First I would like to express my appreciation for the opportunity to apply for this scholarship. I hold a degree in Hotel management from the Higher Institute for Tourism and Hotels - King Mariot- Alexandria. I was Fighting through my studies and hard, I love my field of study, therefore, decided to delve in this area and joined the master's study at the University of Alexandria, when the opportunity came to complement this study in a European country, I was very happy because the study abroad this represents the next important challenge in my life. Studying and living abroad can help not only broaden my horizons but accelerate my personal and academic growth as well. The opportunity of meeting and associating with people from all over the world and to be immersed in a society with a global outlook and politically neutral understanding of life, My objective is to pursue the M.sc in hospitality management with emphasis in hotels, management, marketing, plus living and integrating with multilingual people in order to develop a my language which is undoubtedly one of my reasons to study in a European country. I believe that my strong motivation to pursue an International carrier in the field of Hotels and hospitality management and Marketing makes me a strong candidate for scholarship. I am looking forward to the opportunity to study in a European country and immerse myself in my studies; I strongly believe that I am well prepared for studying hospitality management in depth. After my work experience in my own restaurant, I had an excellent pathway to business and I always enjoyed learning about management as I found it fascinating. In addition to my professional experience, I have also had training at"American hotel, lodging association" to how to be trainer in hospitality department and another certification in F&B skills which gave me experiences in working selflessly for others. The study Masters in European country is certain level of knowledge in hospitality management which will provide me the ability and confidence necessary to work.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
Sincerely
Mohamed Farouk
Dear Sir,
First I would like to express my appreciation for the opportunity to apply for this scholarship. I hold a degree in Hotel management from the Higher Institute for Tourism and Hotels - King Mariot- Alexandria. I was Fighting through my studies and hard, I love my field of study, therefore, decided to delve in this area and joined the master's study at the University of Alexandria, when the opportunity came to complement this study in a European country, I was very happy because the study abroad this represents the next important challenge in my life. Studying and living abroad can help not only broaden my horizons but accelerate my personal and academic growth as well. The opportunity of meeting and associating with people from all over the world and to be immersed in a society with a global outlook and politically neutral understanding of life, My objective is to pursue the M.sc in hospitality management with emphasis in hotels, management, marketing, plus living and integrating with multilingual people in order to develop a my language which is undoubtedly one of my reasons to study in a European country. I believe that my strong motivation to pursue an International carrier in the field of Hotels and hospitality management and Marketing makes me a strong candidate for scholarship. I am looking forward to the opportunity to study in a European country and immerse myself in my studies; I strongly believe that I am well prepared for studying hospitality management in depth. After my work experience in my own restaurant, I had an excellent pathway to business and I always enjoyed learning about management as I found it fascinating. In addition to my professional experience, I have also had training at"American hotel, lodging association" to how to be trainer in hospitality department and another certification in F&B skills which gave me experiences in working selflessly for others. The study Masters in European country is certain level of knowledge in hospitality management which will provide me the ability and confidence necessary to work.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
Sincerely
Mohamed Farouk
Top answer
Hello Mohamed. I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage. Please fix them and post your revised version.
- Hello Mohamed.
- I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage.
- Please fix them and post your revised version.
- Also, divide your letter into convenient paragraphs.
- Dear Sir, First I would like to express my appreciation for the opportunity to apply for this scholarship.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
3 Answers
0
Hello Mohamed. I have underlined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage. Please fix them and post your revised version. Also, divide your letter into convenient paragraphs.
Dear Sir,
First I would like to express my appreciation for the opportunity to apply for this scholarship. I hold a degree in Hotel management from the Higher Institute for Tourism and Ho
Dear Sir,
First I would like to express my appreciation for the opportunity to apply for this scholarship. I hold a degree in Hotel management from the Higher Institute for Tourism and Ho
00
this is my motivation letter after reviwe
Dear Sir,
First I would like to express my appreciation for the opportunity to apply for this scholarship. I hold a degree in Hotel Management from the Higher Institute for Tourism and Hotels - King Mariot- Alexandria.
I love my field of study therefore decided to delve at this area and join the master's at the University of Alex
Dear Sir,
First I would like to express my appreciation for the opportunity to apply for this scholarship. I hold a degree in Hotel Management from the Higher Institute for Tourism and Hotels - King Mariot- Alexandria.
I love my field of study therefore decided to delve at this area and join the master's at the University of Alex
00
Dear Sir,
First I would like to express my appreciation for the opportunity to apply for this scholarship.
I hold a degree in Hotel Management from the Higher Institute for Tourism and Hotels, King Mariot, Alexandria. I love my field of study, and therefore I decided to delve further into this area and enroll in the Master's program at t
First I would like to express my appreciation for the opportunity to apply for this scholarship.
I hold a degree in Hotel Management from the Higher Institute for Tourism and Hotels, King Mariot, Alexandria. I love my field of study, and therefore I decided to delve further into this area and enroll in the Master's program at t
0
Related Questions