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Kathirkaman Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Help in editing a sentence
Please look at the following sentence:
"This reduction in contact may mean that appearance-related psychosocial problems are either not detected or when they are there is insufficient time to offer effective and appropriate support"
Any suggestion on how to edit this sentence agreeing with the rule for correlative conjunctions or is the one given above correct as given?
"This reduction in contact may mean that appearance-related psychosocial problems are either not detected or when they are there is insufficient time to offer effective and appropriate support"
Any suggestion on how to edit this sentence agreeing with the rule for correlative conjunctions or is the one given above correct as given?
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I would re-order it, too, for dramatic effect: This reduction in contact may mean that appearance-related psychosocial problems are either detected with insufficient time for effective and appropriate support or not detected at all.
- I would re-order it, too, for dramatic effect: This reduction in contact may mean that appearance-related psychosocial problems are either detected with insufficient time for effective and appropriate support or not detected at all.
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I would re-order it, too, for dramatic effect:
This reduction in contact may mean that appearance-related psychosocial problems are either detected with insufficient time for effective and appropriate support or not detected at all.
This reduction in contact may mean that appearance-related psychosocial problems are either detected with insufficient time for effective and appropriate support or not detected at all.
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