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Moneer90 Posted 11 years ago
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I have been engaged in the field of power electronic since my second year at the university; I studied subjects such as industrial electronic, basic and advanced power electronic. Furthermore, I did my third year project on converter. Moreover I started doing my final year project in the fourth year and my thesis’s title is on controlling converter. With all these academic experiences in power electronic, I believe that I have built a strong background in this major thus reinforcing and solidify my intense interest in power electronic through postgraduate studies.
My goal is to contribute to the development and innovation of new approaches so that power converters will be at the cutting edge of modern technologies.
I have been engaged in the field of power electronic since my second year at the university; I studied subjects such as industrial electronic, basic and advanced power electronic. Furthermore, I did my third year project on converter. Moreover I started doing my final year project in the fourth year and my thesis’s title is on controlling converter. With all these academic experiences in power electronic, I believe that I have built a strong background in this major thus reinforcing and solidify my intense interest in power electronic through postgraduate studies.
My goal is to contribute to the development and innovation of new approaches so that power converters will be at the cutting edge of modern technologies.
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Hello, monheer—and welcome to English Forums. I suggest that in future you use the word 'please'. It is a great help in making requests.
- Hello, monheer—and welcome to English Forums.
- I suggest that in future you use the word 'please'.
- It is a great help in making requests.
- I have been engaged in the field of power electronics since my second year of university, where I studied industrial electronics and basic and advanced power electronics.
- I also did my third-year project on converters, and my fourth-year thesis topic is on controlling converters.
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Hello, monheer—and welcome to English Forums. I suggest that in future you use the word 'please'. It is a great help in making requests.
I have been engaged in the field of power electronics since my second year of university, where I studied industrial electronics and basic and advanced power electronics. I also did my third-year project on converters, and my fourth-year thesis topi
I have been engaged in the field of power electronics since my second year of university, where I studied industrial electronics and basic and advanced power electronics. I also did my third-year project on converters, and my fourth-year thesis topi
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thanks Mister Micawber for your kindness, i will use the word "please" in the future, i really appreciate your reply. thank you again.
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