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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Help improve my thesis statement
Hey im writing a 8 page paper about video game addictions and I need help writing a real thesis statement, this is what i have so far:
With staggering numbers of increased gamers and amount of time devoted to video games it is possible that video games are truly addictive.
Can someone help me make this statement better so i can write a whole essay about the basis of it?
With staggering numbers of increased gamers and amount of time devoted to video games it is possible that video games are truly addictive.
Can someone help me make this statement better so i can write a whole essay about the basis of it?
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Begin with a very brief description of what a video game is and a comment on their rise in popularity. The first paragraphs of your essay, then, can add documentation to their evolution and nature. .
- Begin with a very brief description of what a video game is and a comment on their rise in popularity.
- The first paragraphs of your essay, then, can add documentation to their evolution and nature.
- .
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Begin with a very brief description of what a video game is and a comment on their rise in popularity. The first paragraphs of your essay, then, can add documentation to their evolution and nature.
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Begin with a very brief description of what a video game is and a comment on their rise in popularity. The first paragraphs of your essay, then, can add documentation to their evolution and nature.
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