Help !!! Ielts writing task 1

The graph illustrates the number of passengers used Underground Station in London.In general, it was varied during 6am to 10pm

In average the number of passenger at the station is approximately 250 persons. People tend to leave home and go to office in 8am, the main cause to soar passengers up to 400 in this time. Similar to that, 6pm is also the peak time lead to about over 350 peoples traveled at the station.

After got the highest number in 8am, the station was getting incompact until 10am to 2pm, it slightly increased because of break-time, employees leave their office for lunch or meeting customers, a few people went back home or meeting friends. Especially there was a plunge in the number of under 100 passengers in 4pm because people do not usually go out in this time. As the habit of England, they do not have the habit of eat out for dinner. That’s why the passengers is reduced during 6pm to 8 pm.

In conclusion, the number of passenger at Underground Station does not only depend on time but also people’s habits.