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Thanh kieu thi Posted 9 years ago
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Help ielts task 1 :The table shows the percentage of Vietnam’s population according to age group in the period 1979-1999.

The table give information about Vietnam’s citizens in terms of age group in three years 1979, 1989 and 1999.


Overall, the proportion of people between 19-59 years old was higher than the other group. Additionally, 60 and over age group was the most lowest over the given years.


In 1979, the percentage of Vietnam’s citizens between 19-59 years old accounted for 50,4%, which was also the highest point in this year. By contrast, only 7,1% of the oldest age group, compared to 41,2% of the youngest people.


In 1999, the proportion of population aged 15-59 reached the peak at 58,9%, after slightly rose in 1989, at 53,8%. Meanwhile, Vietnam witnessed a slight increase aged 60 and over, only 1% over the given years. On the other hand, children between 0 and 14 years old was significant decline to 39% and 33,5% in 1989 and 1999, respectively.

  

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The table give information about Vietnam’s citizens in terms of age group in three years 1979, 1989 and 1999. Overall, the proportion of people between 19-59 years old was higher than the other group. Additionally, 60 and over age group was the most lowest over the given years.

  • The table give information about Vietnam’s citizens in terms of age group in three years 1979, 1989 and 1999.
  • Overall, the proportion of people between 19-59 years old was higher than the other group.
  • Additionally, 60 and over age group was the most lowest over the given years.
  • In 1979, the percentage of Vietnam’s citizens between 19-59 years old accounted for 50,4%, which was also the highest point in this year.
  • By contrast, only 7,1% of the oldest age group, compared to 41,2% of the youngest people.
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The table give information about Vietnam’s citizens in terms of age group in three years 1979, 1989 and 1999.


Overall, the proportion of people between 19-59 years old was higher than the other group. Additionally, 60 and over age group was the most lowest over the given years.


In 1979, the percentage of Vietnam’s citizens between 19-59 years old accounted for 50,4%, which

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The table give (The verb does not agree with the subject.)

information about Vietnam’s citizens in terms of by age group in the three years 1979, 1989 and 1999.

Overall, the proportion of people between 19-59 (incorrect. The hyphen means "to." "Between 19 to 59" is not good. You need "between 19 and 59" or "19-59")

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