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Mk_nepal Posted 18 years ago
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I am writing a reply to my boss who had asked me to do a review on the Internet service. Below is draft - grateful for necessary corrections. Thanks a lot.
Dear
Thanks for giving me a chance to review the Internet service provided XYZ Company.
We are currently paying NRs XXXXX/quarterly + VAT for 512/256 Kbps bandwidth. This Internet line has been sharing between the office (5 terminal) and 7 residences inside the office.
I have checked the price at other Internet provider for similar bandwidth and found that we are paying a lot money.
ABC – Rs
MON - Rs
BBD - Rs
A12 – Rs
The prices above are obtained from their website.
I think we should either negotiate the price with existing provider or go with different providers. If we go with another provider, I would recommend A12 or MON.
Regards, MK
I am writing a reply to my boss who had asked me to do a review on the Internet service. Below is draft - grateful for necessary corrections. Thanks a lot.
Dear
Thanks for giving me a chance to review the Internet service provided XYZ Company.
We are currently paying NRs XXXXX/quarterly + VAT for 512/256 Kbps bandwidth. This Internet line has been sharing between the office (5 terminal) and 7 residences inside the office.
I have checked the price at other Internet provider for similar bandwidth and found that we are paying a lot money.
ABC – Rs
MON - Rs
BBD - Rs
A12 – Rs
The prices above are obtained from their website.
I think we should either negotiate the price with existing provider or go with different providers. If we go with another provider, I would recommend A12 or MON.
Regards, MK
Top answer
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Dear
Thanks for giving me a chance to review the Internet service provided by?/to? XYZ Company.
We are currently paying NRs *** quarterly and VAT for 512/256 Kbps bandwidth. This Internet line is being shared between the office (5 terminal) and 7 residences [? people are living in the office?] inside the office.
I have
Dear
Thanks for giving me a chance to review the Internet service provided by?/to? XYZ Company.
We are currently paying NRs *** quarterly and VAT for 512/256 Kbps bandwidth. This Internet line is being shared between the office (5 terminal) and 7 residences [? people are living in the office?] inside the office.
I have
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