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Mk_nepal Posted 19 years ago
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00 Scenario – I am writing a feed back of my line manager (LM) to his line manager (ABC). Please would you correct it. Thanks 02 br
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00 Dear <ABC> 02 br
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00 My <LM> to date has done an impressive work for IT section. 02 br
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00 He did a very good work in EFS on his arrival. Prior to his arrival, we could see others files from EFS. As soon as he found it and he informed that it should not be seen due to security reasons. This had been actioned. I think he raised this issue as his role as an Information Manager in his previous office. 02 br
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00 The second work he impressed me on our IT handbook. He revised it and shared with me before distributed to all users. It is very comprehensive and easy to understand for any non-technical users. And also this handbook is being used as module in other offices. 02 br
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00 He is very supportive to his staff. He is concerned on my development. I have received some technical training and opportunity to familiarisation visit to HQ on his recommendation. It increased my knowledge and understanding of how IT team in US operate. It gave me a chance to meet IT staff personally with whom I normally interact on a day to day basis over phone. 02 br
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00 He is very concerned on the IT server room and my workstation in term of health and safety. This would improve the server room better organised. 02 br
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00 In summary he has excellent knowledge of computer, so he is not only supervised my work but also support me on IT issues. 02 br
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00 MK 0-
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00 Scenario – I am writing a feed back of my line manager (LM) to his line manager (ABC). Please would you correct it. Thanks 02 br
02 br
00 Dear <ABC> 02 br
02 br
00 My <LM> to date has done an impressive work for IT section. 02 br
02 br
00 He did a very good work in EFS on his arrival. Prior to his arrival, we could see others files from EFS. As soon as he found it and he informed that it should not be seen due to security reasons. This had been actioned. I think he raised this issue as his role as an Information Manager in his previous office. 02 br
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00 The second work he impressed me on our IT handbook. He revised it and shared with me before distributed to all users. It is very comprehensive and easy to understand for any non-technical users. And also this handbook is being used as module in other offices. 02 br
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00 He is very supportive to his staff. He is concerned on my development. I have received some technical training and opportunity to familiarisation visit to HQ on his recommendation. It increased my knowledge and understanding of how IT team in US operate. It gave me a chance to meet IT staff personally with whom I normally interact on a day to day basis over phone. 02 br
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00 He is very concerned on the IT server room and my workstation in term of health and safety. This would improve the server room better organised. 02 br
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00 In summary he has excellent knowledge of computer, so he is not only supervised my work but also support me on IT issues. 02 br
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00 MK 0-
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0 Dear <ABC> 01 b 00 : 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 My <LM> to date has 01 b 00 done impressive 02 b 00 work for 01 b 00 our 02 b 00 IT section. 02 br 02 br 00 He 01 b 00 did very 02 b 00 good work in EFS on his arrival. 01 b 00 This change has been accomplished 02 b 00 .
- 0 Dear <ABC> 01 b 00 : 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 My <LM> to date has 01 b 00 done impressive 02 b 00 work for 01 b 00 our 02 b 00 IT section.
- 02 br 02 br 00 He 01 b 00 did very 02 b 00 good work in EFS on his arrival.
- 01 b 00 This change has been accomplished 02 b 00 .
- I think he 01 b 00 also 02 b 00 raised this issue 01 b 00 in 02 b 00 his role 01 b 00 as Information 02 b 00 Manager in his previous office.
- 02 br 02 br 00 The second 01 b 00 project 02 b 00 he impressed me 01 b 00 with was our 02 b 00 IT handbook.
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00 My <LM> to date has 01 b 00 done impressive 02 b 00 work for 01 b 00 our 02 b 00 IT section. 02 br
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00 He 01 b 00 did very 02 b 00 good work in EFS on his arrival. Prior to his arrival, we could see others files from EFS 01 b 00 , but
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00 My <LM> to date has 01 b 00 done impressive 02 b 00 work for 01 b 00 our 02 b 00 IT section. 02 br
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00 He 01 b 00 did very 02 b 00 good work in EFS on his arrival. Prior to his arrival, we could see others files from EFS 01 b 00 , but
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0 Thanks Guru - its really helpful. You deserve for Everest beer - if any of the forum Gurus chance to visit Nepal, do let me know - I will help you as far as from my side. 02 br
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00 Have a top weekend. 02 br
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00 Have a top weekend. 02 br
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