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Mk_nepal Posted 19 years ago
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0Guru,02br
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00Scenario – I am writing a feed back of my line manager (LM) to his line manager (ABC). Please would you correct it. Thanks02br
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00Dear <ABC>02br
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00My <LM> to date has done an impressive work for IT section. 02br
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00He did a very good work in EFS on his arrival. Prior to his arrival, we could see others files from EFS. As soon as he found it and he informed that it should not be seen due to security reasons. This had been actioned. I think he raised this issue as his role as an Information Manager in his previous office. 02br
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00The second work he impressed me on our IT handbook. He revised it and shared with me before distributed to all users. It is very comprehensive and easy to understand for any non-technical users. And also this handbook is being used as module in other offices. 02br
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00He is very supportive to his staff. He is concerned on my development. I have received some technical training and opportunity to familiarisation visit to HQ on his recommendation. It increased my knowledge and understanding of how IT team in US operate. It gave me a chance to meet IT staff personally with whom I normally interact on a day to day basis over phone. 02br
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00He is very concerned on the IT server room and my workstation in term of health and safety. This would improve the server room better organised.02br
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00In summary he has excellent knowledge of computer, so he is not only supervised my work but also support me on IT issues. 02br
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00MK0-
  

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0Dear <ABC>01b 00:02b 02br 02br 00My <LM> to date has 01b 00done impressive02b 00 work for 01b 00our02b 00 IT section. 02br 02br 00He 01b 00did very02b 00 good work in EFS on his arrival. 01b 00 This change has been accomplished02b 00.

  • 0Dear <ABC>01b 00:02b 02br 02br 00My <LM> to date has 01b 00done impressive02b 00 work for 01b 00our02b 00 IT section.
  • 02br 02br 00He 01b 00did very02b 00 good work in EFS on his arrival.
  • 01b 00 This change has been accomplished02b 00.
  • I think he 01b 00also02b 00 raised this issue 01b 00in02b 00 his role 01b 00as Information02b 00 Manager in his previous office.
  • 02br 02br 00The second 01b 00project02b 00 he impressed me 01b 00with was our02b 00 IT handbook.
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0Dear <ABC>01b00:02b02br
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00My <LM> to date has 01b00done impressive02b00 work for 01b00our02b00 IT section. 02br
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00He 01b00did very02b00 good work in EFS on his arrival. Prior to his arrival, we could see others files from EFS01b00, but
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0Thanks Guru - its really helpful. You deserve for Everest beer - if any of the forum Gurus chance to visit Nepal, do let me know - I will help you as far as from my side.02br
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00Have a top weekend.02br
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00MK0-

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