@reader1.panix.com: [nq:1]A NEWSPAPER SPINS into view: WAR DECLARED! Below that headline is another smaller column: "Children Grow at Alarming Pace, Studies Show."[/nq] I don't see what's wrong your first part, as is. We've all seen the old movies so it gives us a visual right away. Spinning newspaper, WAR! Works... but only if you're writing story based during a time when newspapers actua
[nq:1]I saw the format for this once but can't recall the exact format. I'd like to do the spin, show the main headline, then insert or move to a smaller news story on that same page. Thanks in advance![/nq] You realize that in the not-too-distant future, after newspapers are dead, that the spinning newspaper will have to be replaced by a spinning liquid crystal screen connected to the
[nq:1]A NEWSPAPER SPINS into view: WAR DECLARED! Below that headline is another smaller column: "Children Grow at Alarming Pace, Studies Show."[/nq] I did a montage like this once, so, I wrote the first line:
Various newspapers spin into view: Also used this to show the passage of time, and reference the prequel, if you will, however, I did write the first film first, and this fil