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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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help for two sentences please

Would you please confirm that you will accept and release payment to us for this LC discrepancy by return email?

We are still waiting for your outstanding Debit Note. Please send them to us ASAP to clearing up the payment earlier for you.
  

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Anonymous Would you please confirm that you will accept and release payment to us for this LC discrepancy by return email? Okay if you want the payment released by return mail. " We are still waiting for your outstanding Debit Note.

  • Anonymous Would you please confirm that you will accept and release payment to us for this LC discrepancy by return email?
  • Okay if you want the payment released by return mail.
  • " We are still waiting for your outstanding Debit Note.
  • Please send it to us ASAP to clear ing up the prior payment.
  • earlier for you.
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AnonymousWould you please confirm that you will accept and release payment to us for this LC discrepancy by return email?

Okay if you want the payment released by return mail. If you want confirmation by return mail, move "by return mail" to just after "confirm."

We are still waiting for your outstanding Debit Note. Please sen
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AnonymousWould you please confirm that you will accept and release payment to us for this LC discrepancy by return email?
It is not clear what you want the other person to return by email - the payment, acceptance of discrepancy, or just a confirmation. Move the phrase closer to its antecedent. Also, you have made a question by the word order, and mixed it up with

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