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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Mary is requested the shipment postponement on January 01st. Please refer to the attached email for your easy reference.



There is one more shipment can be consolidate into the container, please find the revised information in red shown below.
  

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It is unclear who Mary is. Is she the one who requested, or is receiving the email? Mary requested a shipment postponment for after January 1.

— Reefannie

  • It is unclear who Mary is.
  • Is she the one who requested, or is receiving the email?
  • Mary requested a shipment postponment for after January 1.
  • Please refer to the attached email for information.
  • There is one more shipment that can be consolidated in the container.
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It is unclear who Mary is. Is she the one who requested, or is receiving the email?

Mary requested a shipment postponment for after January 1. Please refer to the attached email for information.

There is one more shipment that can be consolidated in the container. Please find the revised information in red below.

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K.
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Try:
Mary requested the shipment to be postponed to January 1. Please refer to the attached email.
The container can hold one more shipment/package/item. Please find the revised information shown in red below.
Chris
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