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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

help for printed flyers

Hello,
below are 3 slogans which will be printed on flyers. Any check would be highly appreciated.

Thank you a lot.
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Local Restaurants and Vineyards presented online in video [do I need comma here?] mixed with fresh Recipes and Tips & Tricks all about Dining with Wine in your local Area.



2)

Local Dog Breeders presented online in video [do I need comma here?] mixed with fresh
Tips & Tricks and other news all about dogs.



3)

We produce high quality event videos
professional and affordable for every budget. Check out our website
and call or email us today!
  

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1) Local Restaurants and Vineyards presented in internet video , sprinkled with Fresh Recipes and Tips & Tricks for Dining with Wine in your Local Area 2) Local Dog Breeders presented in internet video , along with Fresh Tips & Tricks and other News about Dogs 3) We produce professional high-quality event videos affordable for every budget. Check out our website and call or email us today!

  • 1) Local Restaurants and Vineyards presented in internet video , sprinkled with Fresh Recipes and Tips & Tricks for Dining with Wine in your Local Area 2) Local Dog Breeders presented in internet video , along with Fresh Tips & Tricks and other News about Dogs 3) We produce professional high-quality event videos affordable for every budget.
  • Check out our website and call or email us today!
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Local Restaurants and Vineyards presented in internet video, sprinkled with Fresh Recipes and Tips & Tricks for Dining with Wine in your Local Area



2)

Local Dog Breeders presented in internet video, along with Fresh Tips & Tricks and other News about Dogs

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