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Qantic Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Help for my cover letter Thx!



Hi all!

This is my cover letter for a software technician job in the video game business

Thanks for helping me to find my mistakes Emotion: smile

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of "F.O.G.S.A." as I find the position very interesting and appropriate to my ambitions.

I think my experience will be beneficial, indeed, this year, I worked as a maintenance technician for many companies because I was in temporary work but since March to September, I was a software and hardware hotline technician so I know the rules of a customer support and how it works.

Also, I think this job will be for me a great opportunity to combine my work skills with the video game knowledge I have. Indeed, video games are a passion for me specially online video games, which I have a very good experience by tested a lot of different MMORPGs, experience that is necessary to be a good <<reviewer? critical?>> to see how I can be more productive, more effective to improve myself and the service quality.

I am confident that my qualifications will be of interest to you, and I look forward to hearing from you, I am available on any dayweek for a phone call.

Thank you for your attention,

Yours truly,

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Top answer

Hi, Here's a general comment. A cover letter refers to (ie covers) something that is sent with it. For jobs, that is usually a resume.

— Clive

  • Hi, Here's a general comment.
  • A cover letter refers to (ie covers) something that is sent with it.
  • For jobs, that is usually a resume.
  • In other words, the fundamental purpose of a cover letter is to say 'Here is my resume'.
  • So, are you sending a resume with your letter?
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Hi,

Here's a general comment.

A cover letter refers to (ie covers) something that is sent with it. For jobs, that is usually a resume.

In other words, the fundamental purpose of a cover letter is to say 'Here is my resume'.

So, are you sending a resume with your letter?

Best wishes, Clive
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Yes because my resume is save in my profile in the website where I apply so this text will be attached with my resume of course
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Hi,

My resume is save in the website where I apply so of course this text will be attached with my resume

Thx and best wishes, Sebastien
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Hi,

Do you expect them to read your cover letter first? I assume so. Obviously, that has a bearing on how you write it.

I've tried to offer some comments, from the point of view of the manager who reads this. If you want to make any changes, please do that and repost, and then I can just look at your English grammar. OK?

Clive

Dear Sir or M
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Thanks you very much for your help Clive !

So I have done this with your ideas and I hope this time it's not too self-centered
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Hi,

I've made a number of edits.

Good luck with this, Clive

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of "French Online Games Support Agent", as I feel I can bring to you my ability to keep customer service and satisfaction at its peak, and even to contribute to its improveme
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I will try this one

Thank you very much again !
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