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Hi. English is not my mother tongue but I studied English language and literature. Now I write some website contents and articles. One of my articles is rejected 4-5 times. Each time I check and revise it, but they still reject. I could not find out where my mistake is. To help me sleep in peace, can somebody tell me where is the grammar mistake I did? You must be too busy to deal with my article of 500 words but if I can't solve it I will get crazy.
However I could not activate the attachment button to send my article (tried from safari and firefox). Is there a way such as e-mail to send it?

Thanks in advance.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,
Welcome to the Forum.

The best thing is to copy and paste it directly into your post here.

Most of us don't like to work with attachments. One reason is that it is much easier to edit text that we can directly make changes to.

Best wishes, Clive

Lorenya · Answer

Thank you for your kind response. Here is my article :

Recently, scientists have discovered a truth about relationship between red color and reaction of men. Actually, the effect of red color on men has been known by women since the beginning of history but it has recently been proven scientifically that it attracts men. Now, all the men are also aware of this fact as well as women, thanks to the scientists.

In color psychology, some effects of red color have already been discovered. Red color has also obvious physical effects on human beings. It increases blood pleasure, respiration rate and heartbeats and stimulates adrenaline production of the body. It grabs attention. It is also strange that red color causes an illusion of time passing faster. It stimulates our basic instincts such as hunger or fighting against dangers and stirs us to action. Red color is related to power, boldness and animal instincts.

It evokes erotic feelings, too. It is surprising that scientists have discovered that women wearing red are seen as sexier and more attractive very recently. All the other effects of red color were well known for a long time and used in advertising and food sectors. It is also used in relationships very frequently but its effect on men is a very new study. This research is based on showing men some women pictures with red background or pictures of women wearing red clothes and pictures of the same women without any red color. They compared their reactions to these pictures with and without red color. The result is not surprising actually! Ladies in red always have advantage of attracting men and triggering sexual feelings. The participants rated women wearing red clothes or their pictures with red background higher while same women were not seen that much **** when red color was not used in the pictures. Although men are not aware of their instinct of being attracted by women in red, generally most of the women know it well. However, another result of this study showed that men have a tendency to pay more money while they are dating with a woman in red and they are ready for a more expensive night. This result increases the power of feminine 'red weapons'!

Now red color has a scientific proof that it is the power of women, the color of passion, a weapon to be desired and treated generously. If you want men to notice you, to stop talking and look at you when you walk into a room, wear red! If you want an expensive dinner outside, wear red! Women with lack of self-confidence cannot wear red easily as it is a bold color and catches others attention. It shows women more powerful as well as sexier. The powerful and self-confident women always have a higher chance in the world of men. They are respected more and they deserve a more luxurious evening. However, when you are using red color to attract men, adjust the dose carefully not to cause a heart attack!

Clive · Answer

Hi,
I've made a lot of edits, so read carefully. Some are grammar errors, and some are awkward or unnatural wording.

A fundamental error is that we just speak of 'red', not 'red colour'.

If you have any further questions, please post again.

Best wishes, Clive

Recently, scientists have discovered a truth about the relationship between red and men's reaction to it. Actually, the effect of red on men has been known by women since the beginning of history, but it has recently been proven scientifically. It attracts men. Now, all men are also aware of this fact as well as allwomen, thanks to these scientists.

In color psychology, some effects of red have already been discovered. Red has obvious physical effects on human beings. It increases blood pressure, respiration rate and heartbeats, and stimulates adrenaline production by the body. It grabs attention. It is also strange that red causes an illusion of time passing faster. It stimulates our basic instincts, such as hunger or fighting against dangers, and stirs us to action. Red is related to power, boldness and animal instincts.

It evokes erotic feelings, too. It is surprising that scientists have discovered veryrecently that women wearing red are seen as sexier and more attractive. All the other effects of red have been wel- known for a long time, and are used in the advertising and food sectors. It is also used in relationships very frequently, but its effect on men is a very new subject of study. This research is based on showing men some pictures of women with a red background, or pictures of women wearing red clothes and pictures of the same women without any red. The scientists compared the men's reactions to these pictures with and without. The result is not surprising, actually! Women in red always have an advantage in attracting men and triggering sexual feelings. The participants rated women wearing red clothes or their pictures with a red background higher, while the same women were not seen as so **** when red was not used in the pictures. Although men are not aware of their instinct to be attracted by women in red, generally most of women know it well. Another result of this study showed that men have a tendency to pay more money while they are dating a woman in red, and they are ready for a more expensive evening. This result increases the power of feminine 'red weapons'!

Now there is scientific proof that red offers power to women, and that it is the color of passion, a weapon to be desired and treated generously. If you want men to notice you, to stop talking and to look at you when you walk into a room, wear red! If you want an expensive dinner, wear red! Women with a lack of self-confidence cannot wear red easily as it is a bold color and catches others' attention. It makes women more powerful as well as sexier. Powerful and self-confident women always have a higher chance in the world of men. They are respected more and they deserve a more luxurious evening. However, when you are using red to attract men, adjust the dose carefully in order not to cause a heart attack!

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