help for motivation letter

hi i have written a motivation letter for my admission in masters following intructions on this web plz tell me what are my mistakes and how can i make it more stronger plz

Motivation Letter
I am writing to apply for Master’s degree programme in ‘’Process and Chemical Engineering’’ at ABC university Germany for the 2012 spring term. I graduated in November 2011, Bachelor of Science in Chemical Engineering from University of Engineering and Technology Lahore Pakistan.

I did Bachelor and want to do Master’s in Chemical Engineering because I am highly inspire with this field, designing and installation of numerous huge and small equipments and machinery then control and maintenance of whole plant in such a stressful conditions and get a huge production and convert a great amount of raw material into useful material using mental and physical hard work has always been very inspiring to me and always stir me to take interest in these magical process. I always want myself to be one of those who are performing these tasks and making the world astonish.

I am interested in Master’s degree from an International university so that I could equipped myself with latest knowledge and skills that would help me to stand among highly skilful Engineers and I shall be able to make my worth a little in this world where survival of the fittest rule is implemented now these days.

I have always shown a great interest towards my studies and have very good concepts in Mathematics and Science subjects, I always remained in first division during my studies and these facts encouraged me to choose Engineering as a profession for my life. Evidence of this thing is that I was able to take admission in a very good reputable engineering university of Pakistan. Similarly now I want to do more hard work in my studies than before so that I may polish myself more and more and could meet international challenges easily of my field and may open a world of success and honour for me. I want to fulfil my deficiencies that are left in me during my Bachelor in my Master’s studies and want to achieve distinctions in my Master’s.

Yours faithfull