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Could you help to correct the following writting? Thanks in advance.
What you said quite right, the future is in my hand, and I should look into this matter seriously and carefully. But I don't want to leave here until after some time; how long I will stay here I don't know. That depends on.
And besides, changing job is a troublesome thing to do. For relationship with colleagues, I treated them as the formal relationship. I have never scold at them, never offend them. but I don't believe them, I don't want to approach them, neither let them to approach my deep heart. Keeping one's secret is necessary. I don't know what they think of me. Once your weaknesses are release to them, some of them will use this as a means and tell all of them to the boss, and it is hateful.
What you said quite right, the future is in my hand, and I should look into this matter seriously and carefully. But I don't want to leave here until after some time; how long I will stay here I don't know. That depends on.
And besides, changing job is a troublesome thing to do. For relationship with colleagues, I treated them as the formal relationship. I have never scold at them, never offend them. but I don't believe them, I don't want to approach them, neither let them to approach my deep heart. Keeping one's secret is necessary. I don't know what they think of me. Once your weaknesses are release to them, some of them will use this as a means and tell all of them to the boss, and it is hateful.
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[nq:1]Could you help to correct the following writting? Thanks in advance. What you said quite right, the future is in ...
- [nq:1]Could you help to correct the following writting?
- Thanks in advance.
- What you said quite right, the future is in ...
- [/nq] Here's a corrected version.
- Please understand that many other changes to your original words are also possible.
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[nq:1]Could you help to correct the following writting? Thanks in advance. What you said quite right, the future is in ... of them will use this as a means and tell all of them to the boss, and it is hateful.[/nq]
Here's a corrected version. Please understand that many other changes to your original words are also possible. I've tried to make only absolutely necessary changes to try to keep yo
Here's a corrected version. Please understand that many other changes to your original words are also possible. I've tried to make only absolutely necessary changes to try to keep yo
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Thanks Mr. Ramsay
Appreciate it.
Though there are many ESL teachers in Chinese now, a lot of Chinese students have not this kind of opportunity to learn from native English speakers, especially in the poor area. I am working on a free online English study forum, hope may help more Chinese students.
http://bbs.sinolia.
Appreciate it.
Though there are many ESL teachers in Chinese now, a lot of Chinese students have not this kind of opportunity to learn from native English speakers, especially in the poor area. I am working on a free online English study forum, hope may help more Chinese students.
http://bbs.sinolia.
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