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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Help for a sentence please

We shall do you favor to release the payment of USDxxx this time. Please send us the outstanding report for ABC shipment ASAP which had shipped over half year.
  

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We will release the payment of USDxxx this time. Please send us ASAP the outstanding report for ABC shipment , which was shipped over half a year ago. Do not use 'shall' in the first persons singular and plural in your correspondence; it is overbearing and rude nowadays.

  • We will release the payment of USDxxx this time.
  • Please send us ASAP the outstanding report for ABC shipment , which was shipped over half a year ago.
  • Do not use 'shall' in the first persons singular and plural in your correspondence; it is overbearing and rude nowadays.
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We will release the payment of USDxxx this time. Please send us ASAP the outstanding report for ABC shipment, which was shipped over half a year ago.

Do not use 'shall' in the first persons singular and plural in your correspondence; it is overbearing and rude nowadays.
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A few notes that you may find helpful.
You don't need to say "USD $$" because when your company has business arrangement with an oversea vendor or client, the currency for payment should be written in contract and understood.
AnonymousWe shall do you favor to release the payment of USDxxx this time.
You probably meant to say " We will release the payme

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