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Volcano1985 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Help For A Poem

0 01b00I suddenly woke up with you,the night didn’t reach three02br
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00A cloud stayed in my eye,the yearning didn’t suit us02br
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00They say heart is towards heart,did you feel sorry too ?02br
00Even moon goes away,did you think the night ?02br
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00Loneliness is hidden inside me,doesn’t go out even for a moment02br
00I have a photo in my hand,she must be here now02b
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01i00Does it have any mistakes or need to change ?02br
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02br 00This one doesn't make any sense, Volcano-- it is full of non-sequiturs. The lines do not relate one to the other. 02br 00.

  • 02br 00This one doesn't make any sense, Volcano-- it is full of non-sequiturs.
  • The lines do not relate one to the other.
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