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For the year 2015, the Gaon Music Chart announced that Girls' Generation was the overall most successful girl group in South Korea, with the release of their Lion Heart along with two other albums by subgroup TTS and member Taeyeon, respectively, having sold a combined total of over 398,000 physical copies.
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Too many words. The Gaon Music Chart announced that Girls' Generation was 2015's most successful South Korean girl group, with the release of their Lion Heart and two other albums by TTS and Taeyeon selling over 398,000 copies.
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- The Gaon Music Chart announced that Girls' Generation was 2015's most successful South Korean girl group, with the release of their Lion Heart and two other albums by TTS and Taeyeon selling over 398,000 copies.
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Too many words.
The Gaon Music Chart announced that Girls' Generation was 2015's most successful South Korean girl group, with the release of their Lion Heart and two other albums by TTS and Taeyeon selling over 398,000 copies.
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