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Mk_nepal Posted 19 years ago
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0Dear Forun Guru,02br
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00Grateful if you would correct my following letter. Thank you02br
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00Dear ...02br
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00Thanks for putting my attention to re-design on the computerised payslip program.02br
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00Sorry for the deadline that I could not meet. This was due to following reasons:02br
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  1. 00I am out of office for almost three weeks. After returning from leave, I was busy on catching up mails and other office commitments.02br
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  2. 00My backup has also been very busy since arrival of new HoD and now he is on leave for end of Dec 06. This means I have very less time for modifying the payslip program.02br
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  3. 00Since you are going to buy a new customised payroll package which is awaiting for approval from HQ. Once it approves, you will have a complete system with having automated payslip. Therefore if I modify the existing package, it would be wastes of my time.02li
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    00Thanks for using my program in spite of many shortcomings.02br
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02br 00Thank 01b 00you02b 00 for 01b 00assigning me to the re-design of the02b 00 computerised payslip program. Sorry for the deadline that I could not meet. This was due to 01b 00the02b 00 following reasons:02br 01ol 01li 00I 01b 00have been02b 00 out of 01b 00the02b 00 office for almost three weeks.

— Mister Micawber

  • 02br 00Thank 01b 00you02b 00 for 01b 00assigning me to the re-design of the02b 00 computerised payslip program.
  • Sorry for the deadline that I could not meet.
  • This was due to 01b 00the02b 00 following reasons:02br 01ol 01li 00I 01b 00have been02b 00 out of 01b 00the02b 00 office for almost three weeks.
  • 00 02li 01li 00My backup has also been very busy since 01b 00the02b 00 arrival of 01b 00the02b 00 new HoD and now he is on leave 01b 00until the02b 00 end of 01b 00December 200602b 00.
  • 00 02li 01li 01b 00You02b 00 are going to buy a new customised payroll package01b 00, 02b 00which is 01b 00awaiting approval02b 00 from HQ.
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0Dear ...02br
00Thank 01b00you02b00 for 01b00assigning me to the re-design of the02b00 computerised payslip program. Sorry for the deadline that I could not meet. This was due to 01b00the02b00 following reasons:02br
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  1. 00I 01b00have been02b00 out of 01b
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0Thanks Guru,02br
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00Referring to your note, I would like to know what does “01i00get yourself fired02i00” mean?02br
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00Thanks once again.0-
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1i00Lose your job!02i0-
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0Perfect!!! Thats what I wanted to say in my email. Many thanks.0-
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