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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Help editting paragraph
Hello this is my daughters homework and I am not sure how to do it, can you tell me where whre the periods, spelling, commas, caps, etc go???
sir ernest shackletong was a explorer but he was an amzing leader above all else. he felt great responsibility for all of his men and He wouldnt ask them to do anything that he wouldnt do himself? Shackleton an optimist had big dreams. He planed to lead a expedition 1,800 miles across antarctica. On august, 8, 1914, Shckleton sets sail in his ship Endurance. he had no idea of the tradgedy that was going to befall him?
sir ernest shackletong was a explorer but he was an amzing leader above all else. he felt great responsibility for all of his men and He wouldnt ask them to do anything that he wouldnt do himself? Shackleton an optimist had big dreams. He planed to lead a expedition 1,800 miles across antarctica. On august, 8, 1914, Shckleton sets sail in his ship Endurance. he had no idea of the tradgedy that was going to befall him?
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Your daughter should do her own homework; otherwise, she will remain ignorant. Have her post her attempt here, and we will review it for her. PS: Her paragraph has other problems, too.
- Your daughter should do her own homework; otherwise, she will remain ignorant.
- Have her post her attempt here, and we will review it for her.
- PS: Her paragraph has other problems, too.
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Your daughter should do her own homework; otherwise, she will remain ignorant. Have her post her attempt here, and we will review it for her.
PS: Her paragraph has other problems, too.
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Your daughter should do her own homework; otherwise, she will remain ignorant. Have her post her attempt here, and we will review it for her.
PS: Her paragraph has other problems, too.
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