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Noreen Shanahan, a single of mother of a child started out as teacher with low income, decided to endure the hardship cleaning people houses to earn higher wages. The occupation has led the single mother to find new interest in cleaning houses and was passionate with her duties and the clients. Working as a cleaner is difficult; the tasks involve intensive physical activities. It include scrubbing greases off the counter from kitchen to living room, ensuring washroom is free of dirt and mildew and sweeping and mopping every inches on the dusted surface. At the same time during her 5 years occupation as cleaner, her emotion was attached to her workplace and clients who’ve hired her, in addition, she was well aware of their life, to a point, acting as a friend comforting and advising an emotional client who’ve been through in a divorce. 

Throughout my life time, cleaning a small area in house was never easy to do, let alone, to clean an entry house within hours. Cleaning houses and taking laundry was never my speciality due to strong dedication and stamina are require, thus, my feeling for Noreen is understandable of the hardship she go through day in and day out to earn a decent living for her child. Because my part time job place is in a restaurant filled of customer in capacity everyday, so I am responsible to ensure the dinner’s furniture free of dust and the kitchen bacteria free. The job was primarily not for learning experience purposes, in correspond to Shanahan situation; I needed to set myself financially secure to prevent issues in dealing with debts, for instance, education fees. 

Physicality and fatigue are requirement in to entrust with responsibilities; from experience, I can either stands or kneel throughout the work shift. For example, regularly I needed to remove the hard rock like grease off of the surface of the fridge, table, and top of the shelf, however, the soreness in my two arm increases also from the scrubbing that require excessive force. The small pieces of food and garbage shoots all over the places minute by minute and my knee feeling extremely numb and overflow with blood while sweeping every area excessively underneath, so it is difficult to work productively hour after hours.

Despite the amount of work and effort required to occupy into workplace, I’ve also established passion and attached feeling for the placement and the staff. Approximately, I’ve worked in the restaurant over four months now with overloads of pressure and task at hand; anyhow, the staff consistently provide a warm and friendly environment to work in; the toughness of the job is excruciating, although I am encompass with the comforts and warm feeling in the placement and it balance out from pressure.