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I’ve eaten many delicious foods but ice cream is the food I like best. When I was in my old place, every, an old man drove his bike on the streets and rang the bell. Many children in my neighborhood crowded the bike and bought ice cream. The old man behaved around children friendly. He took a funnel-shaped thing and put the ice cream on it. I and my friends used to play the game that who put the ice cream in tongue in the longest time is the winner. I always lost to them because I couldn’t cold and hot foods well. When the ice cream hits your tongue, you will feel extremely cold but soon, you will feel very sweet. I’ve moved to my new place and haven’t eaten that kind of ice cream for three years although there are many ice cream man in my city. I prefer the old man’s ice cream. I wish that I could eat that kind of ice cream on more time.