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Jennifermk Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Help Correcting - The Paragraph contains errors of punctuation and mechanics
Kanaalaq lives in the traditional inuit way: she relies on the cycle of seasons to bring animals for
food and clothing; she makes her own tools; she knows and respects the land. Louise, an important character in Thomas King's Medicine River, is Native but lives in a more European way. She does not live on a reserve but she appreciates her ancestry. Louise cares deeply for Will, who is the narrator of the novel, but she does not want to be married to him. She believes that "marriage (is) always more of a burden on women than on men" and that life is already "complicated enough" (King 180).
food and clothing; she makes her own tools; she knows and respects the land. Louise, an important character in Thomas King's Medicine River, is Native but lives in a more European way. She does not live on a reserve but she appreciates her ancestry. Louise cares deeply for Will, who is the narrator of the novel, but she does not want to be married to him. She believes that "marriage (is) always more of a burden on women than on men" and that life is already "complicated enough" (King 180).
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I don't see any gross errors. What about the paragraph is troubling you?
- I don't see any gross errors.
- What about the paragraph is troubling you?
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