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Crespo Posted 17 years ago
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Help correct this statement

Please correct this statement.
"I would now like to further my studies to the Master's Degree level as this will enable me achieve my career goals in life. I am particularly interested in Information Technology as this is the area I believe I can make the greatest contributions, utilizing my theoretical background and creativity."

I look forward to your reply.
Thanks.
  

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"I would like now to further my studies and do the Master's Degree level as this will help me achieve my career goals. (not sure what you mean by "theoretical background"? Could you explain this a bit?

  • "I would like now to further my studies and do the Master's Degree level as this will help me achieve my career goals.
  • (not sure what you mean by "theoretical background"?
  • Could you explain this a bit?
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"I would like now to further my studies and do the Master's Degree level as this will help me achieve my career goals. I am particularly interested in Information Technology as this is the area in which I believe I can make the greatest contribution, utilizing my creativity and ....(not sure what you mean by "theoretical background"? Could you explain this a bit?

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