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The characters on this show are very endearing because the writers give you more information about each character and personality where on the other show they aren't as endearing because you know nothing about each character or their personality at least not in depth like on the other show.

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The characters on this show are very endearing because the writers give you information about each character and personality. On the other show they aren't as endearing because you know nothing about the characters or their personality , at least not in depth as on the other show.

  • The characters on this show are very endearing because the writers give you information about each character and personality.
  • On the other show they aren't as endearing because you know nothing about the characters or their personality , at least not in depth as on the other show.
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The characters on this show are very endearing because the writers give you information about each character and personality. On the other show they aren't as endearing because you know nothing about the characters or their personality, at least not in depth as on the other show.

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