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AVim Posted 19 years ago
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help correct a sentence
Please help me correct this sentence, I'm not sure about it.
Context:
Assuming I am talking to a man with mental illness, I say:
"Don't you think what you're thinking about is far from ordinary people?"
OK? Thanks.
Context:
Assuming I am talking to a man with mental illness, I say:
"Don't you think what you're thinking about is far from ordinary people?"
OK? Thanks.
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AVim Please help me correct this sentence, I'm not sure about it. " OK? Thanks.
- AVim Please help me correct this sentence, I'm not sure about it.
- " OK?
- Thanks.
- Three uses of "think" might make it a little awkward.
- Try changing the first one to "suppose, imagine," or something of the like.
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AVimPlease help me correct this sentence, I'm not sure about it.
Context:
Assuming I am talking to a man with mental illness, I say:
"Don't you think what you're thinking about is far from what ordinary people would/think/would think?"
OK? Thanks.
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